September 24th 1996
"Wake up honey, time for school." yelled Caddie's mom. Jennifer Burnside is 34 years old and has been married to Edward for 15 years. "Yes Mom." Caddie said sleepily. Caddie rolled over, her alarm clock said 6:00am. Caddie got up and heard her Mom yelling to her two brothers, Joey who is 10 and Matt who is 8, "Get up Joey and Matt!" "Time for school!" Caddie was 12 years old and was in 6th grade. Caddie was ready for school at 6:30 only 15 minutes until she would have to walk to school, today is Caddie's birthday. She wants to invite her best friend, Elizabeth Cohen over to stay the night and she can because it is Friday and Caddie is having a big party with 13 kids! Caddie meet her dad in the kitchen, Caddie's mom was in the shower getting ready for work. "Hey honey, Happy Birthday!" said Caddie's Dad. Caddie's dad is 35 years old and his name is Edward. "Joey move your homework over!" complained Caddie. "Shut up! I'm trying to get done before Mom comes out of her bedroom!" Joey said not looking up from his work. Matt came out of his bedroom really sleepily. "Matt wake up! You know that the bus driver hates you when your half sleeping!" Caddie said. Matt just moaned. "Matt wake up!" yelled Mom from inside her bedroom. "I'm awake" moaned Matt. "Then get walking to the bus stop! You're lunches are in your backpacks!" Mom yelled. "Yes Mom!" Matt, Joey and Caddie all yelled back. Caddie walked out side, to meet her boyfriend, James. James is so cute, he has so cute blond hair, blue eyes and is not fat! "Hey Caddie." James said meeting Caddie at the end of her drive way. "Hey!" So what are you doing tonight?" asked Caddie. "Hm mm... Nothing what are you doing?" asked James. "Today is my birthday and I was wondering do you want to come over? I'm having a pool party!" Caddie said. "I would love to go!" James replied. "Yay! I can't wait! Come right after school. The party starts at 4:00pm. About 15 people are coming." Caddie said. The bus pulled up. Joey and Matt climbed on then Caddie and James. I would tell you about the bus ride but it is really boring. Caddie and James walked to math class. Math was just as boring as it always is, even though Caddie was paying attention, she was about to fall asleep from boredom. James handed her a note. It read; Hey Caddie, I am so bored! I can't wait for that party! <3 James. Caddie wrote back saying; I know I am so bored, I think that I am going to fall asleep! I can't wait for the party too! <3 Caddie. James handed the note back saying "NO! Don't fall asleep! I can't make it with out you awake! Who am I going to write to?!" Caddie wrote back saying "Ok if it means that much to you! I will stay awake for your sake. :)" James did not get to respond because it was time for lunch. James and Caddie walked, with the rest of the class to the cafateria. All of the teachers eat lunch in there class rooms. A huge foodfight was in process. James and Caddie and the rest of there class soon joined in. It was a lot of fun. Caddie hit this tiny, skinny kid with some mashed potatas and the kid fell right over. Caddie finally found her best friend Elizabeth on the other side of cafateria, with some jello in her hair. "HEY!" Caddie yelled when she saw her. It sounded like a wisper because it was so loud in the there! Elizabeth saw her and came over pushing at least 3 kids aside. "Hey! I can't wait for the party tonight!" Elizabeth said when she finally got over to Caddie. "There is going to be about 13 kids there. So it is going to be pretty big!" Caddie said. "Where is James?" Elizabeth responded. "Uh oh! I lost him!" Caddie said all worried. "Caddie is it going to be alright, he is a big boy! He can take care of him self!" "I don't care! I want to be with him as much as I can!" Caddie said back without even looking at her. "Whatever don't go to far or I will loss you!" Elizabeth yelled at Caddie, because Caddie was already running away to look for James. Caddie was looking for about 30 seconds then she ran right into James. Caddie huged him "I found you!" "Yup you found me. Now lets go clean up our hair and clothes." James said as he winked at another girl, which Caddie did not see but Elizabeth and Oliver did. So cadie walked off to the bathroom with James, Elizabeth and James's friend Oliver. Oliver Beringer is 13 years old. Oliver and Elizabeth were really good friends ever since kindgardin. "So James want to do something Sunday, like the mall or something?" Caddie asked James. "I can't this Sunday, I have to go to this thing, I don't whati s called though." James said. "Oh... well have fun." Caddie walked into the girls bathroom. "I have to tell you something Caddie." Elizabeth told Caddie as she started washing out the jello out of her hair. "What you and Oliver like each other? Caddie joked. "No Caddie, I'm serios!" "Okay, Okay don't throw a hissy fit!" Caddie said.
Comments (Show all 89)
Beth said
at 10:58 am on Nov 18, 2008
lol
Denise said
at 12:09 pm on Nov 18, 2008
LOL!!!!
Denise said
at 12:10 pm on Nov 18, 2008
lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol
Denise said
at 12:11 pm on Nov 18, 2008
idk why I did that!!!!! So don't ask k??
Denise said
at 12:11 pm on Nov 18, 2008
rofl
Beth said
at 12:12 pm on Nov 18, 2008
lol
Denise said
at 12:39 pm on Nov 19, 2008
lol
Denise said
at 9:40 pm on Nov 19, 2008
ok lets stop this!!! Do you play club penguin?
Denise said
at 9:41 pm on Nov 19, 2008
I do!
Beth said
at 10:59 pm on Nov 19, 2008
no I don't sadly
Eddie Alicea said
at 10:21 am on Nov 20, 2008
erm werid lol
Denise said
at 2:08 pm on Nov 20, 2008
lol
Denise said
at 9:33 am on Nov 21, 2008
Hey beth why did you get rind of the comments in your post??
Beth said
at 9:48 am on Nov 21, 2008
I didn't. The tacher does when there r too many comments.
Beth said
at 9:48 am on Nov 21, 2008
*Teacher
Denise said
at 10:31 am on Nov 21, 2008
Oh... bad teacher!
Denise said
at 10:32 am on Nov 21, 2008
My bff is comming to spend a night tonight!! I wish you could come but you can't.... my bff's name is Cadie!
Beth said
at 10:51 am on Nov 21, 2008
I don't kow y all my comments r gone. she usually takes out a few. IDK
Beth said
at 10:51 am on Nov 21, 2008
lol, so u name ur character after your bf, that is sweet.
Denise said
at 4:37 pm on Nov 21, 2008
Yup!!
Denise said
at 4:38 pm on Nov 21, 2008
lol
Beth said
at 4:57 pm on Nov 21, 2008
so ulike # 2
Denise said
at 11:39 am on Nov 22, 2008
Ya it is a good one!
Raven von Wood said
at 7:59 pm on Nov 25, 2008
Hey Denise. When are you going to write more? I want to read more! You're doing really good so far. If you need any help, let me know
Denise said
at 11:05 am on Nov 26, 2008
Thanks! I am going to put up more right now!
Denise said
at 9:44 am on Nov 27, 2008
:)
Denise said
at 9:45 am on Nov 27, 2008
I'm going to be gone all day so bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :(
Beth said
at 11:19 am on Nov 27, 2008
cya!
Denise said
at 6:19 pm on Nov 28, 2008
I'm back!!!!
Beth said
at 10:49 pm on Nov 28, 2008
me too! lol
Denise said
at 10:11 am on Nov 29, 2008
lol Hey I love the new chapter!!
Beth said
at 6:25 pm on Nov 29, 2008
thank you, so is James cheating on Cadie? Thats sad!
Denise said
at 7:44 pm on Nov 29, 2008
Yup...
Beth said
at 8:05 pm on Nov 29, 2008
I dont lik james nemore
Denise said
at 10:25 pm on Nov 29, 2008
me neither
Denise said
at 10:25 pm on Nov 29, 2008
lol
Beth said
at 10:29 pm on Nov 29, 2008
he is a poo-poo head!
Beth said
at 10:29 pm on Nov 29, 2008
lol
Denise said
at 9:59 am on Dec 1, 2008
Yes he is!!! lol
Denise said
at 3:49 pm on Dec 1, 2008
Hey I love your story!!!!!!! I've read it 3 times!!!!!!!
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